Shakaku - For orionfantasy

It's a great start. However, I would like to state that there are a few things you could improve on. Don't take it offensively, and instead use it to improve.
First off, spend a bit more time polishing what you have done. The lines are sketchy, and while that's obviously okay for a sketch, (which usually belongs in the sketchbook), you should erase the lines later on, and replace them with smoother ones for your final.
Another thing is proportions and placement. Each part of the face looks pretty good on it's own (especially the eyes, those are amazing), but the placement and size are a bit off. Mainly with the nose. It might be a drawing style, but it's really small, and because it's small, it doesn't reach to where it needs to. This makes the face seem kind of bare. The nose should start between the top of the eyes, and end in place that's quite a bit lower down than the horizontal middle of the face. Sorry I can't tell you exactly where this is. Also, the eye angle is a bit off, as well as the ear angle and placement. All of these can be fixed by drawing a sketch that marks the placement of these parts. I'll send you a quick picture of what this should look like if I have time.
I'm sure you'll be great if you take your time and use good creativity for your pictures Good luck